Mommy constantly seeks approval from those in power, she changes her opinions, and eventually Mrs. Barker (the symbol of power), always gets what she wants from Mommy. this shows that Mommy powerless to authority, acting simply as a willing tool for Mrs. Barker. When Mommy bought a cream colored hat, and Mrs. Barker told her that it was beige, Mommy believed Mrs. Barker and she went back to the store demanding a Cream colored hat. In a way, Mommy blindly follows what's on the market, no matter how useful or not it is.
Mommy also exerts complete control over her husband Daddy. Daddy's "type" is that of complete emasculation. The play even hints that he may have had a sex change. Throughout the play, Daddy quickly agrees with everything that Mommy says. The one time he has a differing opinion is with Grandma and Mommy chews Daddy's head off for it. This oppression confirms Mommy's "type" as a villain and also makes us hate Daddy for not sticking up for himself. We (hopefully) should not be like any of these characters, Mommy's sexual gratification in shopping has left true intimacy a wasteland.
Another way to fulfill Mommy's role as the ultimate materialist is with her dislike of sex. She views sex with Daddy as a chore and instead gets satisfaction out of shopping. This is a depressing way of viewing a marriage and I am sure that Albee does not want us to get sexual satisfaction from buying things.
Mommy and Grandma have an interesting relationship. Grandma plays the part of the subversive. She is the only one of the cast who isn't quick to believing something. She is able to confuse Mommy, and (literally) steal the rooms of the apartment out from under her nose. Mommy attempts to have the same control over Daddy with Grandma but utterly fails, so her reaction is to want to send Grandma away. She doesn't want anything to do with Grandma, since Grandma is not an authority figure, but also cannot be controlled by authority.
Every character in Albees play is a type. None of them except Grandma have a personality, and they all are stereotypes of certain facets of American society. Mommy plays the closest thing to a villain, a person who finds sexual satisfaction from shopping and not from her husband, and a person who has completely emasculated her husband. Albee, by showing us Mommy's exaggerated consumerism, presents a warning to us, showing us the downside to finding, "satisfaction" from a hat. To him, that is all the American Dream is.
This essay is so full of thoughtful, analytical evidence. You really seem to have a good understanding of the play and it definitely shows in your writing. However, I have a hard time understanding what question you are addressing (something the thesis is supposed to answer). Your first paragraph contains a lot of commentary and evidence that I think would work much better in a paragraph of its own (or added to another). Like the last essay (about To Kill a Mockingbird), this essay would benefit greatly from a new introduction! By starting broader and guiding the reader into your thesis, your essay would flow better and be easier to follow. You could then restructure your body paragraphs to follow each part of the thesis. You have so many good ideas that this essay would be perfect with different type of layout!
ReplyDeleteThis essay was very well written!
ReplyDeleteSince we all read it in class, I can actually tell if your facts are correct (and the are!). I felt like you did a wonderful job at presenting the details, which explains your thesis very well. However, since the original prompt wasn't posted at the top, I couldn't tell what the question was, but through your essay, I seemed to get a good sense of the prompt. Although all of the body paragraphs are very well written, just like the last post on "The Portrait of Dorian Gray", it would have benefitted from a more concise conclusion.
Great job overall! I feel like this was the best yet!